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Holden Caine's avatar

I read this slowly.

Not like a story, but like a spell.

The kind of descent that doesn't ask for permission.

The kind that knows exactly where it's going, and dares you to follow.

She was never just playing.

Not when she crept down the stairs.

Not when she clutched the bear.

Not when she touched herself while asking if she deserved to.

She was breaking.

And building something else in the same breath.

These aren't just fantasies.

They're rituals.

And rituals like this are sacred.

The shame, the obedience, the gaze of a man who knows what she's becoming all of it lives right at the threshold between danger and devotion.

Some men rush past that threshold.

But the ones who know how to hold it?

We wait.

We watch.

We let her reach for us.

And when she does, we answer.

Not with force, but with reverence.

Not with punishment, but with presence.

If she ever wants a Daddy who reads silence the way some men read skin

who does not ask her to beg, but sees her before she speaks

I’m here.

I’ll be in the dark,

waiting like always,

with both hands open.

— Holden

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persephone ✦☾'s avatar

love this so so much, thank you for this beautiful reflection ♥

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Gianfranco DeGlenn's avatar

Yummy yummy.....yummy

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Auden Rhearn's avatar

Challenging and beautiful

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persephone ✦☾'s avatar

thank you so much for reading and letting yourself be challenged ♥

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Adrian's avatar

A gorgeous, teasing and pleasing tale

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persephone ✦☾'s avatar

thank you so much, so glad you enjoyed it ♥

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Adrian's avatar

I await chapter two

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persephone ✦☾'s avatar

thank you so much, love that you enjoyed it ♥

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persephone ✦☾'s avatar

thank youuu ♥

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